Slide show and WWWs and EBIs

In my presentation i showed a great understanding of of representation of people in music videos.

WWW:I showed a good understanding of pinks music video and pulled out some good points on the JB vid.

I also presented it well with a nice projected voice

And the slide show i created was well made and obvious effort was put into it

EBI:I did not face the audience constantly but i had to look at the slide to tell me what to say so i should of memorised it more.

also more media in my presentation and made it more "wow"

also if we used less crude language because we sorta said a bad word